Monday, July 2, 2007
Haiku (shadows & light)

This week haiku, One Deep Breath, is based upon shadows and light. I thought of two people in love, soulmates, united as one, reciting their vows as they dance to the memories of years gone by. The youth of the love captured in the reflection of each others eyes while reminiscing in the twilight of the evening stars that hover over the very spot where they first said, I do.


twilight Silhoutte
reflection of my image
submit to a kiss






15 Comments:
Blogger Yoga Gal had this to say:

LOVE THE PHOTO LOVE THE POEM!
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July 2, 2007 at 11:29 PM 

Blogger Michelle had this to say:

What an interesting take on the theme shadows and light. The haiku and picture are wonderful. The picture reminds me of Ty Wilson's line drawings Passion and The Promise. Also beautiful is your write-up about what you were thinking when you created this post. Very nice way of thinking and creating out of the box.

July 3, 2007 at 9:17 AM 

Blogger get zapped had this to say:

Very nice- smooth, mellow and alluring. I love your take on this. It's a great way to start the day :)

July 3, 2007 at 9:46 AM 

Blogger Regina had this to say:

This was just so lovely- and so romantic!

July 3, 2007 at 11:09 AM 

Blogger Plain Foolish had this to say:

I like the ambiguity of the poem. Nice.

July 3, 2007 at 11:39 AM 

Blogger strauss had this to say:

very nice, perfect image to go with the poem

July 3, 2007 at 2:11 PM 

Blogger Mandy had this to say:

very well executed

July 3, 2007 at 4:41 PM 

Blogger Clare had this to say:

Very romantic and heartfelt haiku. And the photo is really sweet and sexy, too.
:)

July 4, 2007 at 2:34 AM 

Blogger Stephen A. Bess had this to say:

great Haiku and wonderful photo!

July 4, 2007 at 8:45 PM 

Blogger Southern Me~ had this to say:

Thanks for the comments. I'll be sure to visit your blogs before the week ends.

July 5, 2007 at 8:29 AM 

Blogger Nancy Bea Miller had this to say:

So lovely!

July 5, 2007 at 8:03 PM 

Blogger Yoga Gal had this to say:

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July 6, 2007 at 6:11 PM 

Blogger Tumblewords: had this to say:

Very nice - unusual, too!

July 6, 2007 at 11:09 PM 

Blogger NeNe had this to say:

Nice, I wish I could write Haiku's.

July 7, 2007 at 1:44 PM 

Anonymous Anonymous had this to say:

Truly romantic! Very nice.

July 8, 2007 at 8:32 PM 

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